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At first,I will introduce myself briefly . My name is Xu Yu Chen .I am 18 years old, born in JiangSu province ,southest of china,and i am curruently a freshmamt at Xian Mining Insitute.my major is engineering manage and I want to become a postgraduate student after receiving my bachelor.3 @, D- e2 _! H
I was very proud of that I was the first person of the entire class to learn the passage by heart.Therefore I want to share the reason about that with you.Firstly, the direct reason to encourage me to recite is my classmate.I has been learnt English since my childhood and the JiangSu’education is very rigid,so I flatter myself that my English is not so dusty. However,there are so many outstanding classmates in my class.I make my mind to study more hard. In National day hoilday,I spend sometime to read the English instead of piaying.Competition makes people original and creative and can stimulate people to try their best to do anything.Secondly,I  like trying new things .I think to  limit ourselves to doing only those things we are good at will make us miss many opportunities to develop other interests and skills.Therefore,sometimes it is necessary for me to try some new things and take some exercise.Though we have the risk of failure when trying new things,we can get many advantages from it.  When I know the task to recite,I also have thought of shrinking.But I want to get in touch of the new passage. Finally,I have the enough courage to be the first one to stand on the platform . Loving taking part in social practice activities has tempered spunk.During the holidays,  I always choose to be the volunteer, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It is obvious that social practice is playing an increasingly essential role in my life.
- H( }2 q) E! c, T) w, y+ q* v6 TAll the things that I mentioned above were the real expression of the reeason. In my opinion, pursing advanced studies is a good way for me to improve myself and benefit my career in the future.This is myself,a girl who is not a good but hard enough.
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Correct the following sentences:At first,I will introduce myself briefly . My name is Xu Yu Chen .I am 18 years old, born in JiangSu province ,southest of china,and i am curruently a freshmamt at Xian Mining Insitute. (At frist后面的逗号后,必须空一格。briefly后面的句号,必须紧跟着y字母,然后空一格。I am前面的句必须穿一格。把上几句的标点符号全改得正规一点。)
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