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This Is Me(旅游管理1601 傅婕)

This Is Me
" P/ R3 f4 ^1 w+ S1 |7 C1 ]( P6 b  My name is Fu Jie,and my English name is Jennie.I am an outgoing girl enjoying foreign languages .2 g- @- O. M6 x" `8 Y' L; [
  I was born in Xiangtan,Hunan province on October 24th,1998.I have a family of 3 people,my father,mother and I.What'more,if possible,I am eager to have a brother or sister in order to accompany my parents after I leave home to chase my dream.; i; \1 O6 F8 g8 m9 R( V2 R8 X
  At the age of 17,I attend the College Entrance Examination.Then I come to the XUST.All the things about the CEE are still flashing of my eyes,they are seemed so fantastic.
2 b4 |; E5 m5 R% H+ J: C- y6 a: B  Going to university means independence and bravery,coping with obstacles on your own,making friends trying your best,learning by yourself...What's a completelydifficulty!
0 d- Y' i2 _5 h8 ]8 h  Fortunately,I have som smart and intimate friends who help me a lot when I was in trouble.They give me correct suggestions,comforting my anxious heart, and always be my side,so that I can fit the life here well.: l& n% B6 N  }0 K5 _$ O
  There' a character which cannot be ignored when introduce myself.I love languages.First, I enjoy speaking English.It has nothing with my accent good or bad,but I just want to speak it aloud,hoping that one day I can speak it fluently with native speakers.Second,I have a strong desire to learn Korean with no troubles.Last summer vacation,I went to Seoul,Korea.There did I touch the exotic culture.Communicating with the locals wasn't such a difficult problem.They are not only speakEnglish well,but also speak Chinese well,which made me feel shock and remind me of learning them well.# {4 n! d0 i7 W7 L  C+ u4 j
  I am delighted to give the introduction to you.Thank you.

RE: This Is Me(旅游管理1601 傅婕)16402070117

Going to university means independence and bravery,coping with obstacles on your own,making friends trying your best,learning by yourself...What's a completelydifficulty!这句话有问题吧?没有主语。
Going to university means independence and bravery.You have to cope with obstacles  on your own,make friends trying your best and learn by yourself ...What a completely difficulty !
What a completely difficulty !再改改这句话的错误.
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