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信息管理与信息系统1602班 张曼婕 9号

writing for myselfhello!Mr.Wang.My name is Zhang Man Jie.I'm an eighteen-; H, o/ B! l3 c( Y! [
year-old girl coming from Xi'An University of Science And
0 E" \& w( k$ U4 {- B. W4 {, l0 CTechnology.It is an university which I'm quite satisfied.
; R: v8 [7 [" |' D& U  Though three years ago,when I entered high school,I was
6 J* s5 Q6 _  x1 d- ldetermined to be admitted by an University of "985"or"211".2 b8 g2 b/ q2 f
And I hoped that school would better in another province not in Shaanxi.But it is a pity that my grade of the National % m; T$ @8 z% M% d7 R$ J
College Entrance Examination is unqualified some universities I've ever expected.Though that was the final result,my parents were still pleased because the goal they wanted me to attain was to be admitted by the first batch of undergraduate.This university is also the case of the key universities./ y! |. K1 b* {; g. a
  When I came into the university,It means a new start.I've never lived in school since I was born.Everything is fresh,everybody is unknown.It is a completely strange circumstance,I chatted with my roommate.To my surprise,The five roommates of mine are all come from Shaanxi Province.If from the language point of view,we have no problem in communication.We talked very happy.I'm cherished each other's friendship because we'll live together for four years.2 |, z- F6 |2 h
  Since I left home,I ate three meals a day in school.At the beigning,I felt fresh,and I think the meal in canteen was delicious.As time went by,I missed my mother's cooking skills.It filled with the taste of home.Everytime in weekends,I could go home and get together with family members.At this time,I feel so lucky that I study in Xi'an.I took the right decision in filling applications for college entrance examinations.
/ R& p3 ^. B; _  I'm interested in singing and playing the piano.I started to learn toplay the piano since I was six years old.At that time,my mother let me learn to dance.Because national dance is popular in those days.But I didn't want to learn it.I can't stand the teacher stretch my legs.My mother had no ways but to let me choose an instrument like Guzheng or violin.But neither do I like.Play Guzheng would pain the hands and play violin would make neck uncomfortable.At the moment I heard a piano piece named <A comme Amour>,which made me intoxicated.So I made up my mide to learn the piano.Though start to learn the piano in this way,Maybe sounds a little funny.But I love playing it more and more,I enjoyed playing it and everytime I play the piano I would in a jovial mood.
: B4 B1 b- V/ C  _9 P  There are so many kinds of student associations in the university,and give me a terrace to reveal myself.According to myhobby,I can choose the association which I'm interested in.And I would do my best to accomplish it.
, m0 v4 J! @. }+ _  In the new surrounding,I would adapt it as soon as possible and stick at studying!
- K* ~7 [, I" D9 d  @, z# m          张曼婕 信息管理与信息系统1602班 9号
It is an university which I'm quite satisfied.少一个介词。
But it is a pity that my grade of the National
( Q+ o3 @6 W* i4 C" D0 nCollege Entrance Examination is unqualified some universities I've ever expected.主语不对。用qualify这个词时,主语一般是人,而不是物。
从你的语言看,你是一个聪明,而且头脑比较清晰的孩子。
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