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工程管理1603班 李怡欢。《My college, my college life》

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0 `$ w* p+ V7 E! u' w0 I《My college, my college life》1 A# j; z6 W- C
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  First of all, please allow me to introduce myself. My name is  Li Yihuan.I was born in XingJiang Urumqi. There are many beautiful place that worth visiting.        7 x! u$ |9 ]6 a8 [. X7 v5 j: X
  After the college entrance  examination. I looked forward to going to  the Xi'an University of Science and Technology.9 u6 v% G3 U( v+ a
   When I stepped  into  the  campus . I  feel  the  good atmosphere  in this  university .  However, I think the  college  life  is  totally different for the high school life. There, I can spend  my time doing anything. For instance, I take part in all kinds of activities , then I go to the library where can open my eyes and boraden my mind. Therefore, I should spend  most of my time in it. Finally, I join the student Union, it really a good place where can develop social skills and       there are more opportunities for me to improve myself . These play an important role in our college life .; x% N( W( V# _7 |* n$ b) ]
  And enrolled into the university,I had the first lesson. My teacher is kind and knowledgeable. He not only teach us knowledge but also how to be a better person , how to change yourself to fit into the society.
8 D  q, s$ q( c! o) y  Then the first English lesson , I saw my teacher riding a unicycle. At first I was very curious because all the teacher can not ride it! This high technology unexpectedly can pronunce that read the English text. Form that moment on , I have remembered the teacher . He is quite responsible and his lesson is so interesting that everyone can laugh.
( G  ]8 O$ v0 l+ P; B& n  One day , I recited the passage for the teacher and my classmates. When the text was finished. The teacher asked me a question that made me think about a little. This question is "Why are you like a boy?" I don't know what  you say. Because just like to play with boys. Like riding a bicycle and taking an adventure with my best friends. So I'd love to make friends with people who has the same interests as  I have .I hope to get more friendship in my four years.
  b. n7 R! D8 o  College is an stage where should our to show ourselves . I sincerely hope that we can live wonderfully and achieve my dreams in college life !
* w$ Z1 a1 n- N) i& _6 g% M4 G  In a few words ,I must set up to study to enhance myself.
There are many beautiful place that worth visiting.       你在课堂上的表现非常好。这一句有错误,请修改。
There are many beautiful places that worth visiting. 谢谢老师
There are many beautiful places that are worth visiting.
After the college entrance  examination. I looked forward to going to  the Xi'an University of Science and Technology.标点符号错误,请修改。
After the college entrance  examination, I looked forward to going to  the Xi'an University of Science and Technology. 谢谢老师 改了
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好的 知道了谢谢老师
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