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本帖最后由 Holyso 于 2017-3-20 07:45 编辑
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On the shoulders of a hero
    For us there are some people who are normal for the others but are heroes in our minds. They may be our teachers or our parents. In the article, the writer’s father didn’t often use his actions or words to encourage his son, but he always silently payed his attention to his son’s life. . A- ~: I4 K* Z
    It is same for our parents to care about us. Our parents perhaps didn’t give us some praised words which we wanted to listen to. But they had a good knowledge of this social, they used their experience to guide us to find a way suited to us. Our parents are heroes, who is of great importance to educate us to become a human who can make contribution to our country, our family.
1 h+ S& X, Z, Q7 B8 R. n' B- }    I have a firm belief that we are on the shoulders of a hero, it is the reason why we can study in the university instead of wasting youth.
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* w, Y+ h( M* T+ u7 `comment: Please correct the grammatical mistakes of the following sentnece: But they had a good knowledge of this social,
Correct: they had a good knowledge of this society./ u1 x( U. p( Z5 R; p3 q; i+ ]
I'm sorry,I thought it is noun.
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comment: I add one point for your one reply.
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