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读后感 旅游管理1601 陈鑫

After reading on the shoulders of a hero,all sorts of feelings well up in one's heart.
# @. t6 A$ v  |# Z8 NThe writer's father,a great but selfless hero.Although he is not a perfect father,he has many shortcomings.Of course,no one is perfect.
: O  a' b: g1 M% YWhen we are young,most of us don't comprehend love from others,what's worse,we may dislike this sort of love.As time goes on,we gradually understand this feelings,understand elder.However,time always play a cruel role in our life∶We begin to know something of love,we have to leave our closest relative to live for us and our future,we have the ability to care them,they may have gone.Time is always merciless,so it does we more love the people we love.' Z# ?$ B7 c' z! ]9 t9 i
Father and mother always love us,this love is so clear and selfless.We are always on the shoulders of hero,but we aren't conscious of it until they leave us.So,we should do something for them to make up.
: l4 `8 V# @; L( [* kIn my opinion,very parent are heros,and we will be heros for our kids.
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4 r9 P- G& Y; Ucomment: After reading on the shoulders of a hero,all sorts of feelings well up in one's heart.  这一句的分词逻辑主语与主句的不一致。请改正。(all sorts of feeling不能充当reading的主语)
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