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Not Poor,Just Broke读后感 旅游管理1601张洪川

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2 K" p2 b$ t5 B- r! {' ZNot Poor,Just Broke 读后感 旅游管理1601  张洪川 164020701211 C( h* I$ ]9 T$ O$ |
     The outline of “Not Poor , Just Broke”is as follows. The writer lived in a single-parent black family.The family consisted of a mother and kids,and they were so underprivileged that they lived on relief . Even though ,the writer`mother did not lose her hopes. No matter how perishing the condition was ,she would smile and   say:“we ain't poor ,we're just broke.”And she taught her kids that  man has two ways out in life——laughing or crying. There is more hope in laughing.Although her body was bad ,she gave her kids the indispensable things as far as possible. Recalling what the mother did ,the writer revealed the excellent soul of his mother and the values she cherished.0 `2 I8 G; f3 [' p3 A
     There are some thoughts about the article.
5 o* N4 l' {' T1 F     First of all,I can not help expressing my appreciation about mother's love.In the article, the mother always gave the hope to her kids so that the kids like the author who clould live a valuble life.Mother's love is so selfless ,and everyone should cherished it.Above all,we should report back on what has been done by our mother." j3 d3 g3 ?2 A4 M% N1 v/ _
     Otherwise,as he mother said:we ain't poor,we're just broke.we should not lose our help,there is more hope in laughing.The world is so splendid ,we should firmly believe that we can live a better life and sunshine comes after the storm. As long as we work hard ,anything is possible.: d2 g8 M+ O& S
     To make a long story short, we should be promissing to face the life and cherish the mother's love!
mother love.请改正一下这个词组中的错误。
mother's love
改正得还可以,也可以改为motherly love
The family consisted of a mother and kids,they were so underprivileged so that they lived on relief . 请改正标点符号方面的错误。
本帖最后由 张洪川 于 2017-5-1 10:54 编辑 6 `( q5 v/ }( g1 l

- b& d4 [7 [5 J: x! w0 I4 S* g% vThe family consisted of a mother and kids, and they were so underprivileged that they lived on relief.
改得很好。
Even though ,the writer`mother did not lose her hopes. 这句话也是讲法错误。
Even though,the writer's mother was full of hope for life.
还多了一个标点符号。
Even though the condition of this family was so terrible,the writer's mother was full of hope for life.
You have a good command of English.
No matter how perishing the condition was ,she would smile and   say:“we ain't poor ,we're just broke.”
how perishing? I can not understand.
我从来没有见过perishing与condition 这个词搭配。
No matter how terrible the condition was ,she would smile and   say:“we ain't poor ,we're just broke.”4 U  l3 Q- `" `& W) B7 Z

7 ]& ^; }5 p8 J* |: ]1 K(Oh,my captain.I am so morose that I have made so many mistakes.)
and everyone should cherished it.
and everyone should cherish it.
The world is so splendid ,we should firmly believe that we can live a better life and sunshine comes after the storm.
本帖最后由 16402070121 于 2017-5-29 15:48 编辑
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2 `" F5 H: [; s/ kThe world is so splendid that we should firmly believe that we can live a better life and sunshine comes after the storm.
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